Wednesday, October 21, 2009

What is the good hooks for an essay about how people around you(my family) made you today ?

so they say the apple does not fall far from the tree....

What is the good hooks for an essay about how people around you(my family) made you today ?
In your introduction say how your family has made you what you are in all aspects of your life.





Then (on a separate piece of paper or Word document) list all the aspects of your life and the things that you and they believe are important. For example, friendships, loyalty, love, education, honesty, integrity, patriotism etc etc (there are probably dozens of things).





Then write at least 2 or 3 sentences about each one, giving examples and your opinion on each one. Each of these items (at least 2 or 3 sentences, but perhaps as many as 10 or even more) makes a PARAGRAPH.





Your conclusion will be your last paragraph where you try to sum up all the things you have been discussing.





Remember that your family includes your extended family (grandparents, aunts/uncles etc).





Good luck



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